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You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter - [ ] Describe the training course you want to do - [ ] Explain what the company could do to help you - [ ] Say how the course will be useful for your job

You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter - [ ] Describe the training course you want to do - [ ] Explain what the company could do to help you - [ ] Say how the course will be useful for your job g3aA
Dear Manager, I am write for apply training course which I see in advertisement. the training course is for computers and it can helping me for my job. I need to learn more about use computer and this course can be useful for me. I need to use computer a lot, so I will benefit from this and the company will also benefit because I will be good at using it for my job. the course shows how to use internet, use software and other useful thing about computers. I want the company to pay for my course. If company pay, it is good for company and good for my work. I can't afford to pay for course so I hope you can helping me with this.  Please I ask you, will you pay for my course. I know you will not regret it. You will see I am very good at use computers in my job. Yours faithfully Surbhi
Dear Manager,

I am write for apply training
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course
which I
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see
in advertisement.
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the
training
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course
is for computers and it can
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helping
me for my job. I need to learn more about
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use
computer and this
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course
can be useful for me. I need to
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use
computer a lot,
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so
I will benefit from this and the
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company
will
also
benefit
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because
I will be
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good
at using it for my job.
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the
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course
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shows
how to
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use
internet,
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use
software and other useful thing about computers. I want the
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company
to
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pay
for my
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course
. If
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company
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pay
, it is
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good
for
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company
and
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good
for my work. I can't afford to
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pay
for
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course
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so
I hope you can
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helping
me with this.  
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Please
I ask you, will you
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pay
for my
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course
. I know you will not regret it. You will
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see
I am
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very
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good
at
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use
computers in my job.

Yours
faithfully


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IELTS letter You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter - [ ] Describe the training course you want to do - [ ] Explain what the company could do to help you - [ ] Say how the course will be useful for your job

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