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you have seen an advertisement in an australian magazine for someone to leave with a family and look after six year old son. write a letter to the parents. in your letter explain why you like this job. geive details of whu you would be suitable person to employ. *say how you would spend your free time while you are in australia.

you have seen an advertisement in an australian magazine for someone to leave with a family and look after six year old son. write a letter to the parents. in your letter *explain why you like this job. *geive details of whu you would be suitable person to employ. *say how you would spend your free time while you are in australia. GjV2

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to let you know that, I would like to apply for this job. I like little children and spend time to take care of them. I am relocating to Australia for higher studies in xyz University, which involves course about food habits and special care. Let me explain you why I am suitable person for this job. I am certified person from British child care service, and completed a course on children care personal from one of the Government recognized organization. During my graduation I has been working with a family with 2 little children’s, where their parents working late nights. During the free time I spend my time with children by reading the stories, playing games and most important is outing; so that children’s can be thought to be social when they are around other children’s and elders. It would be my pleasure if you consider my application, for any further query please use the contact details mentioned in application. Looking forward for your response. Yours sincerely Jay Thomas

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Jay Thomas