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You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer lNjQ
Dear Sir or Madam, I live in a block B With one of my Senior. i Am not comfortable with him at all. And Room is too congested. My problem is that my room mate do party all the time> And invite His friends Over all the time. I can not focus on my study due to the environment. I requested to him A lot of times that please let me focus on my study. As my exams are near but he never listened to me. Other main problem is that there is no aircon in my room. In this hot Summer session i need a room with Air condition Facility. And i am requesting you please let me have my own one bedroom with Air condition. I am more than happy to pay reasonable amount for the room. i will wait for your respond. Thank you Yours Faithfully Meet Singh
Dear Sir or Madam,

I
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live
in a block B With one of my Senior.
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i
Am not comfortable with him at all. And
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Room
is too congested.

My problem is that my
This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.
room mate
do party all the time> And invite His friends Over all the time. I can not focus on my study due to the environment. I requested to him
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A lot of
times that
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please
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let
me focus on my study. As my exams are near
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but
he never listened to me. Other main problem is that there is no
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aircon
in my room.

In this hot Summer session
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
need a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
with Air condition Facility. And
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
am requesting you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me have my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
one bedroom with Air condition. I am more than happy to pay reasonable amount for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
room
.
Did you mean "I"?
i
will wait for your
Did you mean "response"?
respond
.

Thank you

Yours
Faithfully


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Meet
Singh

IELTS letter You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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  American English
7 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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