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You have been working with your company for two years and are interested in a promotion. Write a letter to your direct boss. In your letter: Explain your varied achievements over the past two years Express your interest in growing with the company Ask for a meeting to discuss a potential promotion.

You have been working with your company for two years and are interested in a promotion. Write a letter to your direct boss. In your letter: Explain your varied achievements over the past two years Express your interest in growing with the company Ask for a meeting to discuss a potential promotion. nJRP

Dear Mr. Philips, The purpose of this letter is to discuss the possibility of advancement in my current position. I joined here 2 years back as a project team leader. In past two years with hard work and under my supervision our team launched a number of successful products, Moreover we developed around 4 patents. We have already won best working team thrice in last two years, Although team worked hard to perform extraordinarily but I think my leadership and open to new ideas was an asset to the team. The environment of company is immensely full filling, nurturing and help to expand in my carrier financially as well as in experience. I would like to request our management through you for the promotion as operation manager which is vacant now. In the past I have worked at same position temporarily moreover this position is totally related to the operations of our section. I am totally ready to fill in the shoes for this position. It's better if we can have a official meeting regarding this position after working hours, we can discuss how I can be suitable for this position and you can fill me with what our company demand from this position. Waiting for a favorable response from you. Yours faithfully

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Yours faithfully