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You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it,

You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it, xmm51

Dear Mr. Charles, I am writing to express my interest in working at our company's headquarters in Belgium for a few months to enhance my skills and get exposure to the global market trends of our products so that I can better contribute to my company and carry out my responsibilities more efficiently. As you know, I have been recently promoted to the assistant product managerpost and I am working hard to collaborate with my team to enhance the sales and increase our brand reputation. However, I have been feeling the need to meet and work with our global team members and attend some training sessions that our head office in Brussels arranges frequently. I am quite positive that the opportunity to work in our company's head office for six months will further enhance my knowledge and give me exposure to the global market trend. I have talked with Neil and he has agreed to take up my responsibilities during my absence. Furthermore, I will check my emails daily, and be available for emergency phone calls. Once I get back to the office, I would endeavor to work extra hours in order to catch up on anything I had missed. Finally, I would need your support to get approved so that I can work in our company's head office for 6 months and fulfill the objectives. I look forward to your positive reply. Yours sincerely, Vachana Rose

Dear Mr. Charles,

I am writing to express my interest in working at our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
's headquarters in Belgium for a few months to enhance my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 exposure to the global market trends of our products This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can better contribute to my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 and carry out my responsibilities more efficiently
.

As you know, I have been recently promoted to the assistant product Possible spelling mistake found.manager post
managerpost
 and I am working This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to collaborate with my team to enhance the sales and increase our brand reputation. However
, I have been feeling the need to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 with our global team members and attend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 training sessions that our head You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 in Brussels arranges frequently
. I am quite This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 that the opportunity to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 in our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
's head You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 for six months will further
 enhance my knowledge and give me exposure to the global market trend.

I have talked with Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).Neil, and
Neil and
 he has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesced
agreed
 to take up my responsibilities during my absence. Furthermore
, I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
check
 my emails daily, and be available for emergency phone calls. Once I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 back to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
, I would endeavor to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 extra hours in order to catch up on anything I had missed.

Finally
, I would need your support to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 approved This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskindustrytrialjobproductionstruggle
work
 in our This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
's head You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 for 6 months and fulfill the objectives.

I look forward to your This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 reply.

Yours sincerely
,

Possible spelling mistake found.Vacant
Vachana
 Rose