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you work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. write a letter to your manager. In your letter, explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months, say how your work could be done while you are away, ask for his/her help in arranging it

Dear Sir, I am writing here to express my interest to work in the main office of our organization in France for the next six months. As you know I have been capable of managing the development of our company as well as lived up to the expectation of the superior and management of the superiors and management, I think I shall be given an opportunity to continue the job in the head office for half an year. Meanwhile, if you permit me to do so, I assure you that my responsibility at present office might be taken by me and my colleague, "Mr. Smith. He will handle each and every assignment of mine. Additionally, I will also be accessible on internet as well as on phone calls. For all he arrangements, I require our travel manager, 'Mrs. Smita" to provide me the instructions for visa and the rest of the procedures as well. Thanks you for you consideration concerning this matter. Yours Sincerely, Kerlix
Dear Sir, I am writing here to express my interest to work in the main office of our organization in France for the
next
six months. As you know I have been capable of managing the development of our
company
as well
as
lived
up to the expectation of the superior and management of the superiors and management, I
think
I shall be
given
an opportunity to continue the job in the head office for half
an
year. Meanwhile, if you permit me to do
so
, I assure you that my responsibility at present office might
be taken
by me and my colleague,
"
Mr. Smith. He will handle each and every assignment of mine.
Additionally
, I will
also
be accessible on internet
as well
as on phone calls. For all
he arrangements
, I require our travel manager, 'Mrs.
Smita
"
to provide me the instructions for visa and the rest of the procedures
as well
.
Thanks you
for
you
consideration concerning this matter. Yours
Sincerely
,
Kerlix
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IELTS letter you work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. write a letter to your manager. In your letter, explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months, say how your work could be done while you are away, ask for his/her help in arranging it

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  American English
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5.5
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