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you work at home and have a problem with piece of equipment that you use for your job. write a latter to the shop or company which sepplied theequepment.

Dear sirmy name is john. I writing this latter for you. I many purchas from your shop. As you know i buy a printer 3 das a go but after two days leter that when i want to print a picture for larg size, I relieze one small line on the picture. You know my job is photografer and work in tv and also i buy this device on the advice of my colleague. Because basment of my home is very big and i working easily at there. however i rechaeg again that's not work as well. i think this printer have a problem. As you said give me a one week test. Because this printer is very expensive. I want to change this machine. I read in a magazine about this printer more than of those people facing with problem and when working get very hot. these day i have a lot of customer and i'm very busy. I can't waiting for garanti and fix that. I want you, please, if possible change this printer and bring a model higher than this and i will pay the difference. I hope you can solve my problem. thank you. your sinceerly
Dear
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sirmy
name is john.
A verb seems to be missing. Did you mean “I’m writing”, “I am writing”, or “I was writing”?
I writing
this latter for you.
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I
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many
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purchas
from your shop. As you know
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i
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buy
a printer 3
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das
a go
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but
after two days
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leter
that when
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i
want to print a picture for
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larg
size, I
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relieze
one
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small
line on the picture. You know my job is
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photografer
and work in
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tv
and
also
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i
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buy
this device on the advice of my colleague.
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Because
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basment
of my home is
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very
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big
and
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i
working
easily
at there.
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however
i
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rechaeg
again that's not work
as well
.
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i
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think
this printer have a problem.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
you said give me a
When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: “one-week”
one week
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
test
.
“Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
this printer is
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very
expensive. I want to
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change
this machine. I read in a magazine about this printer more than of those
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people
facing with problem and when working
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get
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very
hot.
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these
day
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i
have
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a lot of
customer and
Did you mean “I’m”?
i'm
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very
busy. I can't
The modal verb ‘can’ requires the verb’s base form.
waiting
for
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garanti
and
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fix
that. I want you,
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please
, if possible
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change
this printer and bring a model higher than this and
Did you mean “I”?
i
will pay the difference.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope you can solve my problem.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
thank
you.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.
your
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.
sinceerly

IELTS letter you work at home and have a problem with piece of equipment that you use for your job. write a latter to the shop or company which sepplied theequepment.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
199 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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