Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

you work at home and have a problem with piece of equipment that you use for your job. write a latter to the shop or company which sepplied theequepment.

Dear sirmy name is john. I writing this latter for you. I many purchas from your shop. As you know i buy a printer 3 das a go but after two days leter that when i want to print a picture for larg size, I relieze one small line on the picture. You know my job is photografer and work in tv and also i buy this device on the advice of my colleague. Because basment of my home is very big and i working easily at there. however i rechaeg again that's not work as well. i think this printer have a problem. As you said give me a one week test. Because this printer is very expensive. I want to change this machine. I read in a magazine about this printer more than of those people facing with problem and when working get very hot. these day i have a lot of customer and i'm very busy. I can't waiting for garanti and fix that. I want you, please, if possible change this printer and bring a model higher than this and i will pay the difference. I hope you can solve my problem. thank you. your sinceerly
Dear
sirmy
name is john.
I writing
this latter for you.
I
many
purchas
from your shop. As you know
i
buy
a printer 3
das
a go
but
after two days
leter
that when
i
want to print a picture for
larg
size, I
relieze
one
small
line on the picture. You know my job is
photografer
and work in
tv
and
also
i
buy
this device on the advice of my colleague.
Because
basment
of my home is
very
big
and
i
working
easily
at there.
however
i
rechaeg
again that's not work
as well
.
i
think
this printer have a problem.
As
you said give me a
one week
test
.
Because
this printer is
very
expensive. I want to
change
this machine. I read in a magazine about this printer more than of those
people
facing with problem and when working
get
very
hot.
these
day
i
have
a lot of
customer and
i'm
very
busy. I can't
waiting
for
garanti
and
fix
that. I want you,
please
, if possible
change
this printer and bring a model higher than this and
i
will pay the difference.
I
hope you can solve my problem.
thank
you.
your
sinceerly
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS letter you work at home and have a problem with piece of equipment that you use for your job. write a latter to the shop or company which sepplied theequepment.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
199 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts