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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Mary I am Sam Chan, who is your new neighbour since last week. As I just finished unpacking my things and tired up my flat, I would like to hold a party and invite my friends to come. In addition, I am hoping you can join us too. The party is going to be held on this Friday night as most of my friends do not need to work on Saturday, and I noticed that you are having a regular office hour. That's why I would like you invite you too. In the party, I am going to order some food and drinks. I will also bake some cakes as I love baking very much. Besides, I will prepare some broadgames for ice-breaking. If you like, I can also prepare microphone and music for you to sing. It is my pleasure if you can come and join the party. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes Sam Chan
Dear Mary

I am Sam Chan, who is your new
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neighbour
since last week. As I
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just
finished unpacking my things and tired up my flat, I would like to hold a
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party
and invite my friends to
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come
.
In addition
, I am hoping you can
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join
us too.

The
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party
is going to
be held
on this Friday night as most of my friends do not need to work on Saturday, and I noticed that you are having a regular office hour. That's why I would like you invite you too. In the
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party
, I am going to order
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some
food and drinks. I will
also
bake
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some
cakes as I
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love
baking
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very
much.
Besides
, I will prepare
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some
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broadgames
for ice-breaking. If you like, I can
also
prepare microphone and music for you to sing.

It is my pleasure if you can
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come
and
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join
the
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party
. I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.

Best wishes

Sam Chan

IELTS letter You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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