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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................., You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am Sam Chan, one of the customer of your hotel. I am writing to express my unsatification of the status of the furniture. My family and I is having a travel in your country and we have booked your hotel as the place for us to stay during this period. The facilities of your hotel look good and the customer service is fine. Nevertheless, there is one problem, that is the bed. One leg of the beg has broken. It doesn't like a new damage and seems no one notice it. It makes the beg shake no matter we sit or lay down. I understand there should be no instant action can be taken in order to fix it in a short period of time. As a result, I would like to request for change the room. I hope you will accept and take step on my suggestion. I look forward to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Sam Chan
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am Sam Chan, one of the customer of your hotel. I am writing to express my
Possible spelling mistake found.
unsatification
of the status of the furniture. My family and I
The pronoun “I” must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb.
is
having
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply “travel”.
a travel
in your
Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
country and
we have booked your hotel as the place for us to stay during this period. The facilities of your hotel look
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
and the customer service is fine.

Nevertheless
, there is one problem,
that is
the bed. One leg of the
The word ‘beg’ is a verb. Did you mean the noun “bag”?
beg
has broken. It doesn't like a new damage and seems no one notice it. It
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
the
The word ‘beg’ is a verb. Did you mean the noun “bag”?
beg
shake no matter we sit or lay down.

I understand there should be no instant action can
be taken
in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
it in a short period of time.
As a result
, I would like to request for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
the room.

I hope you will accept and take step on my suggestion. I look forward
In the grammatical structure ‘look + forward + to + verb’, the verb ‘to’ is used with the gerund: “to hearing”.
to hear
from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sam Chan

IELTS letter You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ,

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
164 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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  • You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................., You should write at least 150 words.