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You have arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement

Dear Alex, I hope you are doing well at your place with your family and girl friend. As you know I have a schedule to come to England next week. Unfortunately, the program is postponed at the moment because of an important occasion at home. You must be happy to hear that my sister Rekha got engaged yesterday and now, her ring ceremony will be organised by next week. It will be giant gathering on this moment as all relatives are invited to attend the ceremony. Hence, I am unable to travel to your place at as per our early discussion. I really feel awkward to cancel my plan as I am also eagerly waiting to see you soon, also felt sorry for the arrangement you have done for my accommodation and travel plans. well, I'm sure that we will definitely enjoy our next plan on next month, so please rearrange the same as before. lot of love. Manu
Dear Alex,

I hope you are doing well at your place with your family and
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girl friend
.
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As
you know I have a schedule to
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come
to England
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next
week. Unfortunately, the program
is postponed
at the moment
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because
of an
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important
occasion at home. You
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must
be happy to hear that my sister
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Rekha
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got
engaged yesterday and
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now
, her ring ceremony will be
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organised
by
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next
week. It will be giant gathering on this moment as all relatives
are invited
to attend the ceremony.
Hence
, I am unable to travel to your place at as per our early discussion.

I
really
feel awkward to cancel my plan as I am
also
eagerly
waiting to
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see
you
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soon
,
also
felt sorry for the arrangement you have done for my accommodation and travel plans.

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well
, I'm sure that we will definitely enjoy our
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next
plan on
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next
month,
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so
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please
rearrange the same as
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before
.

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lot
of
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love
.

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Manu

IELTS letter You have arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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