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You have arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain the important event apologise for the situation suggest a new arrangement

Dear Alex, I hope you are doing well at your place with your family and girl friend. As you know I have a schedule to come to England next week. Unfortunately, the program is postponed at the moment because of an important occasion at home. You must be happy to hear that my sister Rekha got engaged yesterday and now, her ring ceremony will be organised by next week. It will be giant gathering on this moment as all relatives are invited to attend the ceremony. Hence, I am unable to travel to your place at as per our early discussion. I really feel awkward to cancel my plan as I am also eagerly waiting to see you soon, also felt sorry for the arrangement you have done for my accommodation and travel plans. well, I'm sure that we will definitely enjoy our next plan on next month, so please rearrange the same as before. lot of love. Manu

Dear Alex,

I hope you are doing well at your place with your family and This is normally spelled as one word.girlfriend
girl friend
. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 you know I have a schedule to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to England You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlater
next
 week. Unfortunately, the program is postponed
 at the moment This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 occasion at home. You This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 be happy to hear that my sister Possible spelling mistake found.RehabRochaRSHARebaRenaReva
Rekha
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 engaged yesterday and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
, her ring ceremony will be Possible spelling mistake. ‘organised’ is British English.organized
organised
 by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlater
next
 week. It will be giant gathering on this moment as all relatives are invited
 to attend the ceremony. Hence
, I am unable to travel to your place at as per our early discussion.

I really
 feel awkward to cancel my plan as I am also
eagerly
 waiting to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
, also
 felt sorry for the arrangement you have done for my accommodation and travel plans.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Well
well
, I'm sure that we will definitely enjoy our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlater
next
 plan on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlater
next
 month, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 rearrange the same as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter.Lot
lot
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
.

Possible spelling mistake found.ManyManMenuMannManiManx
Manu