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You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it,

Dear sir I am writing to request that you accept my work as a head office in your company in France for the upcoming six months As you know, the actual director has a number of health problems. Thus he would not be able to do his job for at least half a year. Dueto the fact, I want to travel to Paris and do the labor. The reason of this decision is the great opportunity to evolve my self and go on with my career. Further, I would like to improve my skills in French language. About my actual duties, my assistant Merry could organize all the chores while am away. Hence, I well contact her daily and give her all the aid she needs. I hope you will admit my request. I will appreciate all the help you might give it to me to organize this task. I am looking forward to hearing from you yours sincerely
Dear sir

I am writing to request that you accept my work as a head office in your
company
in France for the upcoming six months

As you know, the actual director has a number of health problems.
Thus
he would not be able to do his job for at least half a year. Dueto the fact, I want to travel to Paris and do the labor. The reason of this decision is the great opportunity to evolve my self and go on with my career.
Further
, I would like to
improve
my
skills
in French language.

About my actual duties, my assistant Merry could organize all the chores while am away.
Hence
, I well contact her daily and give her all the aid she needs.

I hope you will admit my request.

I will appreciate all the
help
you might give it to me to organize this task.

I am looking forward to hearing from you

yours
sincerely
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IELTS letter You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it,

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
158 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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