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You use trains to reach office but the timetable of the train has been changed recently. Also, the train you take to work no longer stops at your station. Write a letter to the railway authority about it.

Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to draw your kind attention that, the train schedule in my area has recently been changed and due to this, many office goers like me are suffering. I am hoping you would keep the previous timetable and introduce more frequent trains for the convenience of the residents. I am a banker and I work as an assistant manager at the City Bank. I regularly commute to my office using your train. Sadly, the train I used to take to reach office no longer stops at our station and as a result, we need to travel a few extra miles to reach the City Centre Station which is overcrowded in the morning hours. I am often late to reach my office and have objections about the revised train timetable. With the introduction of the new train schedule, daily commuting for employees like me has become utterly difficult which ultimately makes your service unreliable. Unfortunately, because of this problem, many commuters are late for their work which is affecting their productivity. Consequently, they are very upset about your service. As a solution to this problem, I would recommend you to revert to the previous schedule and arrange more trains during the peak hours. If it is not possible, then at least add more carriages to increase the space. It will be a great relief if you can resolve this problem as soon as possible. Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply soon. Yours faithfully, Campbell Scott
Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to draw your kind attention that, the
train
schedule in my area has recently been
changed
and due to this,
many
office
goers like me are suffering. I am hoping you would
keep
the previous timetable and introduce more frequent
trains
for the convenience of the residents.

I am a banker and I work as an assistant manager at the City Bank. I
regularly
commute to my
office
using your
train
.
Sadly
, the
train
I
used
to take to reach
office
no longer
stops
at our station and
as a result
, we need to travel a few extra miles to reach the City Centre Station which
is overcrowded
in the morning hours. I am
often
late to reach my
office
and have objections about the revised
train
timetable.

With the introduction of the new
train
schedule, daily commuting for employees like me has become
utterly
difficult which
ultimately
makes
your service unreliable. Unfortunately,
because of this
problem,
many
commuters are late for their work which is affecting their productivity.
Consequently
, they are
very
upset about your service.

As a solution to this problem, I would recommend you to revert to the previous schedule and arrange more
trains
during the peak hours. If it is not possible, then at least
add
more carriages to increase the space. It will be a great relief if you can resolve this problem as
soon
as possible.

Thank you for giving the matter your attention and I hope to hear your reply
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Campbell Scott
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IELTS letter You use trains to reach office but the timetable of the train has been changed recently. Also, the train you take to work no longer stops at your station. Write a letter to the railway authority about it.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
258 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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