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A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter: Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum. Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. Give details of when you would be available for work.

Dear Sir, I would like to bring it to your kind attention that I am intrested in doing a voluntary at your museum unpaid. It is because of my interest towards paintings and I wish to introduce myself as a artist too. I am from family backgroung of painters and voluntering gives me a wonderful opportunities to learn about different kinds of creativities. So I think this part-time would be more suitable for me to upskill my carrier growth. I think, it does not deserves salary for this because of my passion. For the visitors in museum, I can be helpful in explaining the paintings clearly and educate them in all aspects. Also I can have live paintings where some audience can be benefited and I know five languages: English, Hindi, Tamil, Telugu and Malayalam. So, I can impress the crowd and make them comfortable. I am looking for your feedback and I am ready to join tomorrow itself. So, I kindly request you to give me an opportunity for my exposure. Thanking you. Yours sincerely, Gokul.
Dear Sir, I would like to bring it to your kind attention that I
am intrested
in doing a voluntary at your museum unpaid. It is
because
of my interest towards paintings and I wish to introduce myself as a artist too. I am from family backgroung of painters and voluntering gives me a wonderful opportunities to learn about
different
kinds of creativities.
So
I
think
this part-time would be more suitable for me to upskill my carrier growth. I
think
, it does not deserves salary for this
because
of my passion. For the visitors in museum, I can be helpful in explaining the paintings
clearly
and educate them in all aspects.
Also
I can have
live
paintings where
some
audience can
be benefited
and I know five languages: English, Hindi, Tamil, Telugu and Malayalam.
So
, I can impress the crowd and
make
them comfortable. I am looking for your feedback and I am ready to
join
tomorrow itself.
So
, I kindly request you to give me an opportunity for my exposure.

Thanking you. Yours
sincerely
, Gokul.
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IELTS letter A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the unpaid work. In your letter: Explain why you want to do voluntary work at the museum. Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. Give details of when you would be available for work.

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  American English
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6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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