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You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping centre near your home. Write a letter to the town council. In your letter, do the following: say how you heard about the plan explain how you feel about it ask for more information about it. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

Dear Sir or Madam, I am living in this town for more than twenty years. Yesterday when I was walking around the street to the market, I saw a poster talking about a developer plans to build a shopping center in this town and which the location in near my home to. Therefore I am writing so show my interest in the plan and want to ask for more information about it. In this town, there is supermarket, some shops selling cloth. However, there is no shopping center. If I need to shop for some technical items or other high-end items, I needed to drive for around an hour to another town. So I think it is a good idea to have a shopping center in this town. From the poster, I only know the location of the shopping center. May I ask for some more information about it, such as which type of shop will be invited in it, how large will be the center and any facilities will be inside other than shop. I am looking forward to your information soon. Yours faithfully, Kan Kong

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am living in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 for more than twenty years. Yesterday when I was walking around the street to the market, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a poster talking about a developer plans to build a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
 center in this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 and which the location in near my home to. Therefore
 I am writing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 my interest in the plan and want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :solicitrequest
ask for
 more information about it.

In this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
, there is supermarket, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 shops selling cloth. However
, there is no You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
 center. If I need to shop for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 technical items or other high-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 items, I needed to drive for around an hour to another You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 it is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 to have a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
 center in this town.

From the poster, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 know the location of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withspendinge-commercebrowsing
shopping
 center. May I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :solicitrequest
ask for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 more information about it, such as which type of shop will be invited
 in it, how large will be the center and any facilities will be inside other than shop.

I am looking forward to your information This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours faithfully
,

Kan Kong