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Last month you had a trip to another city where friend is living. You planned to meet him, but unfortunately it could not possible. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Apologise for not being able to meet. Explain the reasons why you couldn’t meet him. Also ask him about a possible plan of further meeting.

Dear Smita, I hope this letter finds you in best of your health and spirits. I am writing this letter to apprise you that last month I paid a visit to your city Bangalore. It was the second to none experience for me as I have never been there before. Firstly, I would like to apologise for not being able to catch you there. So sorry for this. The reason for not visiting you was that I went for a meeting with some of my colleagues. Moreover, I caught up with some pending work which needed to be finished within the deadline, for which I had to work round the clock to get it done as soon as possible. I again apologise that I could not able to meet you. However, to mend it I have got some days off in the next week. I would be happy if you come over to my home. Surely, we will spend the whole day roaming around such places and making the most of it. I am sure you are going to like it. Hoping to see you soon. Loads of hugs and kisses Yours lovingly XYZ
Dear Smita, I hope this letter finds you in best of your health and spirits. I am writing this letter to apprise you that last month I paid a visit to your city Bangalore. It was the second to none experience for me as I have never been there
before
.

Firstly
, I would like to apologise for not being able to catch you there.
So
sorry for this. The reason for not visiting you was that I went for a meeting with
some
of my colleagues.
Moreover
, I caught up with
some
pending work which needed to
be finished
within the deadline, for which I had to work round the clock to
get
it done as
soon
as possible.

I again apologise that I could not able to
meet
you.
However
, to mend it I have
got
some
days off in the
next
week. I would be happy if you
come
over to my home.
Surely
, we will spend the whole day roaming around such places and making the most of it.

I am sure you are going to like it. Hoping to
see
you
soon
. Loads of hugs and kisses

Yours
lovingly
XYZ
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IELTS letter Last month you had a trip to another city where friend is living. You planned to meet him, but unfortunately it could not possible. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter Apologise for not being able to meet. Explain the reasons why you couldn’t meet him. Also ask him about a possible plan of further meeting.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
193 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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