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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: • correct the information in the article • explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • suggest what the magazine should do about this situation Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Mr. Watson, I am writing this letter with reference to an article published in the International Travel Magazine. I was travelling from Sydney to Gold Coast when I have read this article and found out that some information mentioned in this article about my town, Parramatta, is wrong. Firstly, it states that Parramatta has an international airport. However, this is wrong because we do not have any airport in Parramatta so far. Secondly, the writer mentioned that Parramatta beach is very famous tourist place. Unfortunately, there is no beach in Parramatta, but we do have Parramatta river which is also a famous spot for tourist. It is significant to print correct information in the magazine as people read such magazines to get more knowledge and information. In fact, many people refer to such magazines and newspapers while doing any survey and research. I would recommend to print this article again with the correct information. Also, please mention about the wrong information printed in the article before. Yours faithfully, Amritpal Kaur
Dear Mr. Watson,

I am writing this letter with reference to an
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article
published in the International Travel
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. I was travelling from Sydney to Gold Coast when I have read this
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article
and found out that
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mentioned in this
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about my town, Parramatta, is
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wrong
.
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, it states that Parramatta has an international airport.
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tourist place. Unfortunately, there is no beach in Parramatta,
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we do have Parramatta river which is
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spot for tourist.

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in the
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magazine
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read such
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more knowledge and
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information
. In fact,
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people
refer to such
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magazines
and newspapers while doing any survey and research.

I would recommend to print this
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article
again with the correct
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information
.
Also
,
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mention about the
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before
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Yours
faithfully
,

Amritpal Kaur
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IELTS letter You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: • correct the information in the article • explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information • suggest what the magazine should do about this situation You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
170 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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