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You are going to another country to study, you would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.

Dear kibriyaHope you are doing well, Im doing fine, I'm very very happy to inform you next month i will abroad Uk for my study. I would like to complete my graduation, from the most famous Harvard university, as well ass i want to do a part-time job, in near my university. For support my graduation, such as my tuition fee, and accommodation, you know I'm the eldest son of my family l, I’ve huge responsibility that’s why, my father couldn’t help me at the moment, furthermore, i thik it will be better for ke to find a job. But suddenly I couldn’t find a job at the moment, because i will be new there. Last few month i have learning some new works such as driving, cooking, in fact shopkeepers. So if you could find a job for me I’ll be grateful to you. I hope look forward see you soon
Dear kibriyaHope you are doing well, Im doing fine, I'm
very
very
happy to inform you
next
month i will abroad Uk for my study. I would like to complete my graduation, from the most
famous
Harvard university,
as well
ass i want to do a part-time
job
, in near my university. For support my graduation, such as my tuition fee, and accommodation, you know I'm the eldest son of my family l, I’ve huge responsibility that’s why, my father couldn’t
help
me at the moment,
furthermore
, i thik it will be better for ke to find a
job
.
But
suddenly
I couldn’t find a
job
at the moment,
because
i will be new there. Last few month i have learning
some
new works such as driving, cooking, in fact shopkeepers.
So
if you could find a
job
for me I’ll be grateful to you.

I hope look forward
see
you
soon
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IELTS letter You are going to another country to study, you would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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