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You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months Say how your work could be done while you are away Ask for his/her help in arranging it

You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months Say how your work could be done while you are away Ask for his/her help in arranging it 0A6nO
Dear Sir, I hope you are doing great. I am writing this letter to get a permission to work at our head office at Spain. As you aware that, I am living in this city with my family but my parents are not with me, they lives in Spain. Last week, I got to know that my father is in hospital due to a horrible accident, and he had a fracture at his knee ankle. Doctor recommended that, he needs support at least for 6 months to recover properly. Hence, my kind request to grant me a work there. Besides, I would like to update my regular works from beginning of the day and while leaving the office at evening. I will drop the email along with work-done summary, although you can call me for any urgent meeting or task in order to finish it perfectly. I will be waiting for your prompt reply with positive feedback. Thank you for your co-operation and support. Also sorry for the inconvenience caused to you. Your sincerely, John
Dear Sir,

I hope you are doing great. I am writing this letter to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a permission to work at our head office at Spain.

As you aware that, I am living in this city with my family
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
my parents are not with me, they
The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: "live"
lives
in Spain. Last week, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
to know that my father is in hospital due to a horrible accident, and he had a fracture at his knee ankle. Doctor recommended that, he needs support at least for 6 months to recover
properly
.

Hence
, my kind request to grant me a work there.
Besides
, I would like to update my regular works from beginning of the day and while leaving the office at evening. I will drop the email along with work-done summary, although you can call me for any urgent meeting or task in order to finish it
perfectly
.

I will be waiting for your prompt reply with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
feedback. Thank you for your co-operation and support.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Also
sorry for the inconvenience caused to you.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
sincerely
, John
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IELTS letter You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months Say how your work could be done while you are away Ask for his/her help in arranging it

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  American English
6 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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