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feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, • describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team • summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts • say how you think the company should spend the money

feedback from the general public. Write a letter to the company. In your letter, • describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team • summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts • say how you think the company should spend the money pRLLd

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to present my view on sponsorship amount. As a company you guys are doing a fascinating job of supporting physical and mental health of the public. Sports is vital part of daily life. Supporting sport as a part of money will surely solve numerous problem to mange the entire team for their expenses, also it will encourage people to participate more in extra activity. Although, concerts plays an important role in relaxation of human body, it is also consider that people hold control cerebral, if they hold any artistic habit. Supporting open air concert will help people to express their thoughts and bring people closer. In my opinion, both physical and mental parts are necessary in day to day life, so spending equal amount of money on both of them will fill people’s life with joy and benefits. Hope you consider my views. Yours faithfully, John April

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to present my view on sponsorship amount. As a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 you guys are doing a fascinating job of supporting physical and mental health of the public.

Sports is vital part of daily life. Supporting sport as a part of money will surely
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 it will encourage You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 to participate more in extra activity.

Although, concerts plays an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 role in relaxation of human body, it is also
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consider
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people
 hold control cerebral, if they hold any artistic habit. Supporting open air concert will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 to express their thoughts and bring You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 closer.

In my opinion, both physical and mental parts are necessary in day to day life, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 spending equal amount of money on both of them will fill You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people’s
 life with joy and benefits.

Hope you consider my views.

Yours faithfully
,

John April