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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course.

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. awE8V

Dear Miss. Salma, I hope my emile finds you will! . I am writing this email to inform you that I will not be abele to continue the Kickboxing course, you know how much i love kickboxing and how much I want to be a part-time coach. But the new role that I got it in IT department in Saudi Aramco company, that requiers me to go to Riyadh for more than one year and my manager told me today to take this trainning opportunities and how it wii this trainning affect on my career path. But as you know, that thier is nothing that can stop me to achieve my goals. I will buy the equipment that may I neet to continue trainning in my department, and I you to tell me from where shoud I buying for? . And if you know someone in Riyadh that can train me untill I back to train with you in Jeddah. Yours sincerely, Aisha Alhakeem

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