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You have heard about plans to build new apartment public park near home you want to leave your opinion about this write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper in your letter explain how you learnt about this plan see what you think of the park ok give your opinion on the plans

You have heard about plans to build new apartment public park near home you want to leave your opinion about this write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper in your letter explain how you learnt about this plan see what you think of the park ok give your opinion on the plans DlNao
Dear madam, I am writing this letter to provide my concern on the upcoming project which are going to make new housing apartment in a public park near to my house. Well, I came to know about the project by the advertisement which was published in a renowned newspaper ''The Times of India'' on 14th October. Apart from this, the article provide the information about the inauguration which will be held by the MLA of my area. This park is quite close to the heart othe dewellers owing to it provide benefits to all age groups. Youngster play their cricket, basketball and tennis and put off their energy there. Furthermore it is the meeting area of old age masses. Moreover, they sit with their age mates and share their grief and happiness with each other. I have some negative opinions about the the plan of making apartment in this Park due to the fact that high rise apartment will definitely halt the fresh air as well as it makes the area more congested. kindly publish my opinion in your newspaper so that builder and Council can rethink about this project. I am looking forward to you a prompt action. yours faithfully, Poonam.
Dear madam, I am writing this letter to provide my concern on the upcoming project which are going to
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make
new housing apartment in a public park near to my
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. Well, I came to know about the project by the advertisement which
was published
in a renowned newspaper ''The Times of India'' on 14th October. Apart from this, the article provide the information about the inauguration which will
be held
by the MLA of my area. This park is quite close to the heart
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dewellers
owing to it provide benefits to all age groups. Youngster play their cricket, basketball and tennis and put off their energy there.
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Furthermore
it is the meeting area of
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age masses.
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, they sit with their age mates and share their grief and happiness with each other. I have
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negative
opinions about
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plan of making apartment in this Park due to the fact that high rise apartment will definitely halt the fresh air
as well
as it
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makes
the area more congested.
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kindly
publish my opinion in your newspaper
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so
that builder and Council can rethink about this project. I am looking forward to you a prompt action.
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yours
faithfully
,
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Poonam
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IELTS letter You have heard about plans to build new apartment public park near home you want to leave your opinion about this write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper in your letter explain how you learnt about this plan see what you think of the park ok give your opinion on the plans

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