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Informal letter to friend asking for a recommendation of a place to visit for vacation

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Dear Jai, How are you doing? It was so nice to hear about your vacation plans. Knowing the type of adventurous spirit that you are, I really feel that you will enjoy Rishikesh. It is a small town in northern India surrounded by picturesque views of mountains. The weather would also be pleasant this time of year. I had been there last year and enjoyed thoroughly. We were a group of four and decided to shell out on a villa with great views rather than a luxurious hotel in the bustling city. We were so pleased with this decision when we ended our trip on a high note. You will be spoilt for choice when it comes to the adventurous activities there. Be it white water rafting, bungee jumping, paragliding and what not. Each one of them with the views and the weather to die for, are an experience of a lifetime. In fact I, myself am planning to relive the trip. There are multiple staying options that you can find online. The only downside to the place is the reachability from the airport. The roads aren't in the best of shapes and you need to hire a proper transport. I can help you with a local contact who can make things easier though. But I feel it's worth the trouble though. Let me know if you need any further information or a great company. Pack light and enjoy! Bon voyage Yours truly Preyas
Dear
Jai
,

How are you doing? It was
so
nice to hear about your vacation plans. Knowing the type of adventurous spirit that you are, I
really
feel that you will enjoy
Rishikesh
. It is a
small
town in northern India surrounded by picturesque views of mountains. The weather would
also
be pleasant this time of year.

I had been there last year and enjoyed
thoroughly
. We were a group of four and decided to shell out on a villa with great views
rather
than a luxurious hotel in the bustling city. We were
so
pleased
with this decision when we ended our trip on a high note. You will be
spoilt
for choice when it
comes
to the adventurous activities there. Be it white water rafting, bungee jumping, paragliding and what not. Each one of them with the views and the weather to
die
for, are an experience of a lifetime. In
fact I
, myself
am
planning to relive the trip. There are multiple staying options that you can find online. The
only
downside to the place is the
reachability
from the airport. The roads aren't in the best of shapes and you need to hire
a proper transport
. I can
help
you with a local contact who can
make
things easier though.
But
I feel it's worth the trouble though.

Let
me know if you need any
further
information or a great
company
. Pack light and enjoy!

Bon
voyage

Yours
truly


Preyas
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IELTS letter Informal letter to friend asking for a recommendation of a place to visit for vacation

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
243 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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