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You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card

You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card GMwJx
DEAR MR. X I HAVE LOST MY STUDENT INDENTIFICATION CARD ON SUNDAY. AND I MUST APOLOGISE FOR NOT CONTACTING YOU SOONER. AFTER MY CLASSES AT THE UNIVERSITY I PROVIDE TUITION SERVICES NEAR UNIVERSITY CAMPUS. IT USUALLY TAKES AROUND 8. 00-9. 00 PM TO REACH MY RESIDENCE IN BARIDHARA AREA. DURING NIGHT TIME POLICE AND OTHER LAW ENFORCEMENT AGENCIES CHECK COMMUTERS TO BARIDHARA RESIDENTIAL AREA RANDOMLY. WHILE CHECKING THEY OFTEN ASK FOR IDENTIFICATION CARD. I WAS ASKED TO SHOW MY IDENTIFICATION CARD ON MONDAY NIGHT AT CHECK POST WHILE ENTERING BARIDHARA RESIDENTIAL AREA, AND FAILED TO PRODUCE THE SAME AS I HAVE LOST MY IDENTIFICATION CARD. I WAS SUBSEQUENTLY RELEASED AFTER MY FATHER CAME TO THE CHECK POST VOUCHING FOR ME. CONSIDERING MY SITUATION, I AM WRITING TO ASK YOU A FAVOUR. I NEED A NEW STUDENT IDENTIFICATION CARD URGENTLY. I AM WILLING TO PAY REQUIRED FEES CHARGED BY THE UNIVERSITY. I LOOK FORWARD TO HEARING FROM YOU. YOURS FAITHFULLY
DEAR MR. X

I HAVE LOST MY STUDENT
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INDENTIFICATION
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CARD
ON SUNDAY. AND I
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MUST
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APOLOGISE
FOR NOT CONTACTING YOU SOONER.

AFTER MY CLASSES AT THE UNIVERSITY I PROVIDE TUITION SERVICES NEAR UNIVERSITY CAMPUS. IT
USUALLY
TAKES AROUND 8. 00-9. 00 PM TO REACH MY RESIDENCE IN
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BARIDHARA
AREA. DURING NIGHT TIME POLICE AND OTHER LAW ENFORCEMENT AGENCIES
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CHECK
COMMUTERS TO
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BARIDHARA
RESIDENTIAL AREA
RANDOMLY
. WHILE CHECKING THEY
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OFTEN
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ASK FOR
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IDENTIFICATION
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CARD
. I
WAS ASKED
TO
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SHOW
MY
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IDENTIFICATION
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CARD
ON MONDAY NIGHT AT
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CHECK
POST WHILE ENTERING
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BARIDHARA
RESIDENTIAL AREA, AND FAILED TO PRODUCE THE SAME AS I HAVE LOST MY
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IDENTIFICATION
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CARD
. I WAS
SUBSEQUENTLY
RELEASED AFTER MY FATHER CAME TO THE
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CHECK
POST VOUCHING FOR ME.

CONSIDERING MY SITUATION, I AM WRITING TO ASK YOU A
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FAVOUR
. I NEED A NEW STUDENT
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IDENTIFICATION
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CARD
URGENTLY
. I AM WILLING TO PAY REQUIRED FEES CHARGED BY THE UNIVERSITY.

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I
LOOK FORWARD TO HEARING FROM YOU.

YOURS
FAITHFULLY
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IELTS letter You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card

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  American English
6 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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