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You saw a stray dog is being mistreated by your neighbour. You went to the police station to lodge a complaint, but it was denied. Write a letter to Deputy Commissioner of the police for the same. In your letter, Describe what happened Ask the reason why your request turned down Tell what you want the DCP to do

You saw a stray dog is being mistreated by your neighbour. You went to the police station to lodge a complaint, but it was denied. Write a letter to Deputy Commissioner of the police for the same. In your letter, Describe what happened Ask the reason why your request turned down Tell what you want the DCP to do oE3qB
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am Anny Heel. I am writing this letter to draw your attention to a crime committed by my neighbour on a stray dog and how your staffs have ignored it when I tried to complaint about it. I live at Wesley Street, Huston. Yesterday when I was busy with my work suddenly I heard crying of the dog from the street. Therefore, I immediately rushed out and I found that my neighbour Mr. Rison was beating this innocent animal with stick. I tried to stop this animal cruelty, although, he confronted me. At that moment I decided to take this matter to the police station. However, the police officer refused to register my complaint and told me that they are only responsible for human cruelty not the animals. I felt dismayed by his words. I would like to request you to take stringent actions against the police officer for such in human behaviour. I also want you to take my complaint and punish Mr. Rison as well for his cruel manners towards the dog. Looking forward for your support. Yours Faithfully, Anny Heel
Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am
Anny
Heel. I am writing this letter to draw your attention to a crime committed by my
neighbour
on a stray dog and how your staffs have
ignored
it when I tried to complaint about it.

I
live
at Wesley Street, Huston. Yesterday when I was busy with my work
suddenly
I heard crying of the dog from the street.
Therefore
, I immediately rushed out and I found that my
neighbour
Mr.
Rison
was beating this innocent animal with stick. I tried to
stop
this animal cruelty, although, he confronted me. At that moment I decided to take this matter to the police station.
However
, the police officer refused to register my complaint and
told
me that they are
only
responsible for human cruelty not the animals. I felt dismayed by his words.

I would like to request you to take stringent actions against the police officer for such in human
behaviour
.
I
also
want you to take my complaint and punish Mr.
Rison
as well
for his cruel manners towards the dog.

Looking forward for your support.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Anny
Heel
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IELTS letter You saw a stray dog is being mistreated by your neighbour. You went to the police station to lodge a complaint, but it was denied. Write a letter to Deputy Commissioner of the police for the same. In your letter, Describe what happened Ask the reason why your request turned down Tell what you want the DCP to do

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