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An old car was left on the street near your street several weeks ago. The car is now causing a problem for residents. Write a letter to the Council. In your letter: Describe the car Outline the problems it is causing Tell the Council what you want them to do about it.

An old car was left on the street near your street several weeks ago. The car is now causing a problem for residents. Write a letter to the Council. In your letter: Describe the car Outline the problems it is causing Tell the Council what you want them to do about it. RAaV
Dear councilor, The objective of writing this letter is to draw your immediate attention towards a stranded car on the street near my locality. The car is blue color Toyota Camry 2002 or 2003 by make with plate number JK2U3248. All the windows of the car are tainted black, Front hood is damaged moreover there is oil leaking on the street. All the tire of the vehicle are flat. It has been like this for almost two weeks. Let me explain my situation. whenever we try to exit main street to enter parking of our residence it gets difficult to turn around it. At nights many time because of the low light on the street many cars have bumped into it. Its a very horrible experience to drive in the dark. Other than that there is a strong stinky smell coming out of the car which is very uncomfortable for the residents strolling nearby. Would you kindly relocate this orphan car to the junk yard as soon as possible. More over as the time is passing by its making the street smeared with oil and leaked chemical from batteries which is very corrosive to the cars moving on the road. I await a favorable response from you. Thanking you for your consideration. Yours Faithfully Siddharth Bakshi
Dear councilor, The objective of writing this letter is to draw your immediate attention towards a stranded
car
on the
street
near my locality.

The
car
is blue color Toyota Camry 2002 or 2003 by
make
with plate number JK2U3248. All the windows of the
car
are tainted
black, Front hood
is damaged
moreover
there is oil leaking on the
street
. All the tire of the vehicle are flat. It has been like this for almost two weeks.
Let
me
explain
my situation.
whenever
we try to exit main
street
to enter parking of our residence it
gets
difficult to turn around it. At nights
many time
because
of the low light on the
street
many
cars
have bumped into it.
Its
a
very
horrible experience to drive in the dark. Other than that there is a strong stinky smell coming out of the
car
which is
very
uncomfortable for the residents strolling nearby. Would you kindly relocate this orphan
car
to the junk yard as
soon
as possible. More over as the time is passing by its making the
street
smeared with oil and leaked chemical from batteries which is
very
corrosive to the
cars
moving on the road. I await a favorable response from you. Thanking you for your consideration.

Yours
Faithfully
Siddharth
Bakshi
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IELTS letter An old car was left on the street near your street several weeks ago. The car is now causing a problem for residents. Write a letter to the Council. In your letter: Describe the car Outline the problems it is causing Tell the Council what you want them to do about it.

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
215 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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