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You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course. Nk1W
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to let you know that I came across an interesting online course on Agile methodology. The course comprises not only the basic practices of this methodology, but also covers the advanced topics like daily scrum, scrum planning etc. As the number of seats available for this course is limited, I request you to lend me your support to ensure a reservation. Let me explain how this course is beneficial to company upliftment as well as my career. Due to the fact that our project started following Agile methodology, this skill set will come handy while we are dealing with the work flowing from onshore. Also, we can participate in the scrum calls and update the work status. Furthermore, I can help our team upskill themselves on this capability. Our company can showcase this new expertise and get more projects from the client. I request you to kindly grant me leave for 5 days during the thrid week of March so that I could attend this course. Moreover, I will be available during the evening time in case you need my intervention. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Prasanth Kasturi
Dear Sir or Madam,

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you know that I came across an interesting online
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on Agile methodology. The
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comprises not
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only
the basic practices of this methodology,
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covers the advanced topics like daily scrum, scrum planning etc. As the number of seats available for this
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course
is limited
, I request you to lend me your support to ensure a reservation.

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Let
me
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explain
how this
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course
is beneficial to
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company
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upliftment
as well
as my career. Due to the fact that our project
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started
following Agile methodology, this
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skill
set will
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come
handy while we are dealing with the work flowing from onshore.
Also
, we can participate in the scrum calls and update the work status.
Furthermore
, I can
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help
our team upskill themselves on this capability. Our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
can showcase this new expertise and
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get
more projects from the client.

I request you to kindly grant me
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leave
for 5 days during the
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thrid
week of March
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so
that I could attend this
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.
Moreover
, I will be available during the evening time in case you need my intervention.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Prasanth
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Kasturi
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IELTS letter You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

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