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write a letter to travel agent expressing your dissatisfaction with the facilities due to a problem you had on holiday.

write a letter to travel agent expressing your dissatisfaction with the facilities due to a problem you had on holiday. W2wk

I am writing this letter to complain about the facilities that your agency has provided. I recently travelled for a weekly holiday from June 1 to June 7 on a cruise booked through your agent. I was shocked by the quality of the food served. The poor standard services were rendered by the staff of the cruise. While making my booking I mentioned my requirements of opulence facilities but in fact, no attention was paid to it. When I reached there, I found out that the cruise was not a deluxe one. Though I demanded a separate restroom, yet, I had to share it with other tourists which were unacceptable. The cabin was shown in your advertisement not up to the mark. Overall, the experience I got was quite disappointing. I feel I am entitled to a full refund and a written apology for the misinformation contained in your advertisement. I hope to hear from you regarding this matter as soon as possible. yours faithfully, Raman

I am writing this letter to complain about the facilities that your agency has provided. I recently travelled for a weekly holiday from June 1 to June 7 on a cruise booked through your agent. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
was shocked
 by the quality of the food served. The poor standard services were rendered
 by the staff of the cruise. While making my booking I mentioned my requirements of opulence facilities This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in fact, no attention was paid
 to it. When I reached there, I found out that the cruise was not a deluxe one. Though I demanded a separate restroom, yet
, I had to share it with other tourists which were unacceptable. The cabin was shown
 in your advertisement not up to the mark. Overall
, the experience I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 was quite disappointing. I feel I am entitled
 to a full refund and a written apology for the misinformation contained in your advertisement. I hope to hear from you regarding this matter as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterYours
yours
faithfully
, Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphRaman.Raman!Raman?Raman:Raman,Raman;
Raman