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You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future

You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future Yp5K
Dear Mr John, I hope this letter finds you well, I would like to inform you that the all day meeting of our company held at your hotel went really well and all the attendants are quite pleased with the time spent at the place. the member of the meeting team felt happy spending during meeting since the conference room provided in the hotel was comfortable and the everything was up to the mark from lighting, to the furniture, they even did not feel any issues while presenting their presentation through projectors because equipment and connections were found up to the mark. However, the team had concerns with the taste and quality of food provided by the hotel, specially the starters were found stale and smelly, and the chicken served in lunch was not properly cooked, the appetite of the team was not fully satisfied from the provided food. As a review i recommend you that kindly add freshly prepared items in the starters, it may include any drink as well to give a refreshing feeling during exhausted meetings, also please have a random check, if the food is properly cooked or not, before dishing out the main course as it gives a bad impression on customers. Although my team spent a quality time spend at your hotel, and we we are thankful for the quality of services from your side. Kindly, note down the above points for some imporvements in future. Regards, Ayesha Kamal
Dear Mr John,

I hope this letter finds you well, I would like to inform you that the all day
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meeting
of our
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company
held at your
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hotel
went
really
well and all the attendants are quite
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pleased
with the time spent at the place.

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the
member of the
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meeting
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team
felt happy spending during
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meeting
since the conference room provided in the
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hotel
was comfortable and
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the everything
was up to the mark from lighting, to the furniture, they even did not feel any issues while presenting their presentation through projectors
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because
equipment and connections
were found
up to the mark.

However
, the
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team
had concerns with the taste and quality of food provided by the
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hotel
,
specially
the starters
were found
stale and smelly, and the chicken served in lunch was not
properly
cooked, the appetite of the
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team
was not
fully
satisfied from the provided food.

As a review
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i
recommend you that kindly
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add
freshly
prepared items in the starters, it may include any drink
as well
to give a refreshing feeling during exhausted
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meetings
,
also
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please
have a random
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check
, if the food is
properly
cooked or not,
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before
dishing out the main course as it gives a
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bad
impression on customers.

Although my
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team
spent a quality time spend at your
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hotel
, and
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we we
are thankful for the quality of services from your side. Kindly, note down the above points for
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some
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imporvements
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in future
.

Regards,

Ayesha Kamal

IELTS letter You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future

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