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You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future

You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future JeP5
I am writing with regards to provide you with the views of our company's members in our recent meeting which organized in your hotel. Firstly, I would like to inform you about the ambience of your hotel which had left a good impact on us. They are deeply in love with the standards and qualities set for your guest. The artworks inside the hotel have won our heart. However, I am afraid to say that they showed dissatisfaction about the quality of the meal provided. Most of the food has major quality concerns. Many of our member's complaint that the food is not properly cooked. They found raw meats inside the "Chowman rice". Furthermore, the service provided by your waiters is not satisfactory. We had waited long to received our meals at the dining table. On the contrary, I would like to suggest to you some beneficial advice which may lead your hotel to supreme quality. The topmost priority is the training of your staff to deliver the meal on time so, the customer does not need to wait for long. The other thing which could help you is to increase the staff on the cheif side so more food can be prepared in a short period of time with high-class taste. Thanking you for your time and consideration. Thanks and best regards Muhammad Fakhar E Alam
I am writing
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with regards to
provide you with the views of our
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company
's members in our recent meeting which organized in your hotel.

Firstly
, I would like to inform you about the ambience of your hotel which had
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left
a
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good
impact on us. They are
deeply
in
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love
with the standards and
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qualities
set for your guest. The artworks inside the hotel have won our heart.

However
, I am afraid to say that they
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showed
dissatisfaction about the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
quality
of the meal provided. Most of the food has major
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
quality
concerns.
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Many
of our member's complaint that the food is not
properly
cooked. They found raw meats inside the
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"
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Chowman
rice
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"
.
Furthermore
, the service provided by your waiters is not satisfactory. We had waited long to received our meals at the dining table.

On the contrary
, I would like to suggest to you
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some
beneficial advice which may lead your hotel to supreme
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
quality
. The topmost priority is the training of your staff to deliver the meal on time
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
, the customer does not need to wait for long. The other thing which could
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help
you
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is
to increase the staff on the
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cheif
side
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so
more food can
be prepared
in a short period of time with high-
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class
taste.

Thanking you for your time and consideration.

Thanks and best regards

Muhammad
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Fakhar
E
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Alam

IELTS letter You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: say what the participants liked about the hotel explain why they were unhappy about the food suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future

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