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You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course. QGYX
Dear Sir, I am very excited at the news that you would be soon moving to Bangalore. Congratulations on your new job! I would like to help you with some basic information so that you will be at ease once you move to the city. Although your work location is in Whitefield, I suggest you to take a house near Kadugodi. The reason is that house rents in Whitefield are on the steeper side and full of traffic whereas Kadugodi you get at a cheaper rate. Moreover, you can choose from many international schools located in Kadugodi area. With the advent of Metro Rail, it is now much more simpler to travel and avoid the nuisance of traffic. It is the fastest way to get around the city. Bangalore also has well connected bus system which will help you commute hassle free. Especially, with the air conditioned buses you can have travel comfortably. The people in Bangalore are very friendly and I can introduce you to couple of my friends living in that area. You can feel at home with good company around you. Hope to meet you soon. Your friend, Prasanth Kasturi
Dear Sir,

I am
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very
excited at the news that you would be
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soon
moving to Bangalore. Congratulations on your new job!

I would like to
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help
you with
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some
basic information
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so
that you will be at
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ease
once you
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move
to the city. Although your work location is in Whitefield, I suggest you to take a
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house
near
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Kadugodi
. The reason is that
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house
rents in Whitefield are on the steeper side and full of traffic whereas
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Kadugodi
you
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get
at a cheaper rate.
Moreover
, you can choose from
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many
international schools located in
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Kadugodi
area.

With the advent of Metro Rail, it is
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now
much
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more simpler
to travel and avoid the nuisance of traffic. It is the fastest way to
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get
around the city. Bangalore
also
has
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well connected
bus system which will
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help
you commute hassle free.
Especially
, with the
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air conditioned
buses you can have travel
comfortably
.

The
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people
in Bangalore are
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very
friendly and I can introduce you to
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couple of
my friends living in that area. You can feel at home with
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good
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company
around you.

Hope to
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meet
you
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soon
.

Your friend,

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Prasanth
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Kasturi

IELTS letter You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
192 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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