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Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged. In your letter, you should: tell him your name and where you are living describe the problem suggest what you want him to do for it.

Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged. In your letter, you should: tell him your name and where you are living describe the problem suggest what you want him to do for it. mxMK
Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you regard the current condition of reconstructed road in front of my house. My name is David Zane and I am a principle in the local college. My home is located on 33 Avenue, King Faisel road, Post Code 341. Actually, the road which was reconstructed few months prior is in bad condition. The road is totally damage and as this road is linked with the highway therefore, people face trouble while travelling from this road. Moreover, during the rainy days the potholes are filled with the water which could be the cause of any major accidents. There is no any alternative way to commute and due to slow speed of the vehicles there is not only day to night traffic problem but also pressure horn really disturb the residents. This road is unsafe and there are more chances of increasing the number of accidents if it will not be maintained soon. I would lie to suggest to fix this road problem with the trustable contractor. If possible divert the traffic to alternative roadway and reconstruct the whole road rather than patch the potholes. It is also advisable that the asphalt material must be tested in the laboratory before using it. I hope you would take appropriate action at your earliest in this regard. Yours sincerely, David Zane
Dear Sir / Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you regard the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
condition of reconstructed
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road
in front of my
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house
.

My name is David
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Zane and
I am a principle in the local college. My home
is located
on 33 Avenue, King
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Faisel
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road
, Post Code 341. Actually, the
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road
which
was reconstructed
few months prior is in
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
condition. The
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road
is
totally
damage and as this
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road
is linked
with the highway
therefore
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
face trouble while travelling from this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
.
Moreover
, during the rainy days the potholes
are filled
with the water which could be the cause of any major accidents. There is
Did you mean "now" (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
no
any alternative way to commute and due to slow speed of the vehicles there is not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
day to night traffic problem
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but
also
pressure horn
really
disturb the residents. This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
is unsafe and there are more chances of increasing the number of accidents if it will not
be maintained
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

I would lie to suggest to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
fix
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
problem with the trustable contractor. If possible divert the traffic to alternative roadway and reconstruct the whole
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
road
rather
than patch the potholes. It is
also
advisable that the asphalt material
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tested
in the laboratory
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
using it.

I hope you would take appropriate action at your earliest in this regard.

Yours
sincerely
,

David Zane

IELTS letter Write a letter to your local council that the road in front of your house is damaged. In your letter, you should: tell him your name and where you are living describe the problem suggest what you want him to do for it.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
228 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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