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You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course. 0exO
Dear John, I am writing this letter regarding a virtual course I came across while surfing the internet. I am interested in pursuing the course and would like to draw some highlights to you regarding the same. The online course is a data visualization course on the Tableau software. Since most of my work revolves around playing with the data, I feel this course will give me great insights on how I can prepare better visualization reports using the Tableau software. Since it is a virtual course, I don’t have to visit any physical classroom and it wouldn’t even require a great deal of my time. It will take just about 30 mins from my work schedule every day for two weeks. I believe it will be of great help to me and the company if I can get enrolled for this course. I can develop better skills and the company gets wonderful graphical reports that would help analysing the results in an easy way. The fees for the course is very nominal and company seems to get more out of it by paying a small fee for my course. I look forward to hearing from you. Regards
Dear John,

I am writing this letter regarding a virtual
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course
I came across while surfing the internet. I
am interested
in pursuing the
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course
and would like to draw
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some
highlights to you regarding the same.

The online
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course
is a data visualization
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course
on the Tableau software. Since most of my work revolves around playing with the data, I feel this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
will give me great insights on how I can prepare better visualization reports using the Tableau software. Since it is a virtual
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course
, I don’t
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have to
visit any physical classroom and it wouldn’t even require a great deal of my time. It will take
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just
about 30
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mins
from my work schedule every day for two weeks.

I believe it will be of great
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help
to me and the
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company
if I can
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get
enrolled for this
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course
. I can develop better
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skills
and the
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company
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gets
wonderful graphical reports that would
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help
The verb 'help' is used with an infinitive: "to analyse" or "analyse".
analysing
the results
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in an easy way
. The fees for the
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course
is
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very
nominal and
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company
seems to
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get
more out of it by paying a
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small
fee for my course.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Regards

IELTS letter You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

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