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You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course.

You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company could help you do this course. 0exO

Dear John, I am writing this letter regarding a virtual course I came across while surfing the internet. I am interested in pursuing the course and would like to draw some highlights to you regarding the same. The online course is a data visualization course on the Tableau software. Since most of my work revolves around playing with the data, I feel this course will give me great insights on how I can prepare better visualization reports using the Tableau software. Since it is a virtual course, I don’t have to visit any physical classroom and it wouldn’t even require a great deal of my time. It will take just about 30 mins from my work schedule every day for two weeks. I believe it will be of great help to me and the company if I can get enrolled for this course. I can develop better skills and the company gets wonderful graphical reports that would help analysing the results in an easy way. The fees for the course is very nominal and company seems to get more out of it by paying a small fee for my course. I look forward to hearing from you. Regards

Dear John,

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I look forward to hearing from you.

Regards