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You want to appear for an interview to an another city by train. The train departed late from the station and you could not reach in time. Write a letter to the railway officer of your city. In your letter. When you traveled and why the train departed late. What happened as a result. How you feel about the problem.

You want to appear for an interview to an another city by train. The train departed late from the station and you could not reach in time. Write a letter to the railway officer of your city. In your letter. When you traveled and why the train departed late. What happened as a result. How you feel about the problem. Jx1e
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing in connection with an incident that occurred last weekend which has turned my life onto a wasteland path due to late arrival of train. I was travelling from Jaipur to Chandigarh on March 1, 2021 from Rajdhani Intercity Express which was expected to run on time. However, on the moment some issue in the engine was found by the driver due to which train departed 3 hours late from the station. Consequently, when I reached Chandigarh it was almost 3: 00 pm and I already missed my job interview where I supposed to be reaching at 1pm. This was my biggest dream job which I have lost just because of negligence of drivers. It was their responsibility to check the engine and system prior the departure time instead of checking it on the moment. I feel very distressed about this journey. Though I understand neither me nor you can do anything in this situation hence I feel like I lost a golden opportunity of my life. Nevertheless, I do not want this thing to happen with anyone else in the future so that they will blame themselves for their rest of the existence. Hope you will take care of this situation by talking to your staff or drivers that, the late departure of trains matters a lot of people’s life. Your’s faithfully
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing in connection with an incident that occurred last weekend which has turned my life onto a wasteland path due to late arrival of train.

I was travelling from Jaipur to Chandigarh on March 1,
2021
from
Rajdhani
Intercity Express which was
expected
to run on time.
However
, on the moment
some
issue in the engine
was found
by the driver due to which train departed 3 hours late from the station.

Consequently
, when I reached Chandigarh it was almost 3: 00 pm and I already missed my job interview where I supposed to be reaching at 1pm. This was my biggest dream job which I have lost
just
because
of negligence of drivers. It was their responsibility to
check
the engine and system prior the departure time
instead
of checking it on the moment.

I feel
very
distressed about this journey. Though I understand neither me nor you can do anything in this situation
hence
I feel like I lost a golden opportunity of my life.
Nevertheless
, I do not want this thing to happen
with
anyone else in the future
so
that they will blame themselves for their rest of the existence.

Hope you will take care of this situation by talking to your staff or drivers that, the late departure of trains matters
a lot of
people
’s life.

Your’s
faithfully
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IELTS letter You want to appear for an interview to an another city by train. The train departed late from the station and you could not reach in time. Write a letter to the railway officer of your city. In your letter. When you traveled and why the train departed late. What happened as a result. How you feel about the problem.

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  American English
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226 words
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