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You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • give details of the course • say how the course would be useful • explain how the company could help you do this course.

You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • give details of the course • say how the course would be useful • explain how the company could help you do this course. p98d
Dear Dr. Ted, I’d like to inform you that I have received an invitation email from the renowned educational center “CLICKS” to attend a course titled: “Quality in Education for Universities”. As you already know, I’ve always shown interest to attend any course related to education and this center was my first choice. I have taken four different courses at Clicks during the past year and because of that, the center has offered to grant me this course for free. After finishing this course, I should be able to provide a better quality of education for our students by learning to improve different skills and practices that are of great importance during the 21st century. I appreciate it if you can accept my one-week paid leave to attend this course. During this week, I’ll be checking my emails regularly during the afternoon and in case my successor has faced any unexpected problem at work, I’ll be ready to help him during the afternoon hours and make sure the problem is solved immediately. Looking forward to hearing from you. Sincerely yours, Mark Anthony
Dear Dr. Ted,

I’d like to inform you that I have received an invitation email from the renowned educational center “CLICKS” to attend a
course
titled: “Quality in Education for Universities”. As you already know, I’ve always shown interest to attend any
course
related to education and this center was my
first
choice. I have taken four
different
courses
at Clicks during the past year and
because
of that, the center has offered to grant me this
course
for free.

After finishing this
course
, I should be able to provide a better quality of education for our students by learning to
improve
different
skills
and practices that are of great importance during the 21st century.

I appreciate it if you can accept my one-week paid
leave
to attend this
course
. During this week, I’ll be checking my emails
regularly
during the afternoon and in case my successor has faced any unexpected problem at work, I’ll be ready to
help
him during the afternoon hours and
make
sure the problem
is solved
immediately.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Sincerely
yours,

Mark Anthony
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IELTS letter You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • give details of the course • say how the course would be useful • explain how the company could help you do this course.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
181 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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