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Essay topics: A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Thank him/her for the invitation. • Explain why you cannot come • Ask him/her about other times to visit. You need to write at least 150 words.

Essay topics: A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Thank him/her for the invitation. • Explain why you cannot come • Ask him/her about other times to visit. You need to PoyB
Dear Mark, Thank you very much for your invitation. It’s a really generous offer to put me up at your place in Canada for New Year’s Eve. I know how much that means to you and both of us were counting the days to have a reunion and spend some quality time together but unfortunately, I won’t be able to make it due to some problems that came up suddenly at work. I’m still working on the opening of my new café, but the workers had given me hard time. They were supposed to deliver their work a month ago, but the lack of workers and the shortage in material supply have caused the work to delay. We’re currently working around the clock to finish before Christmas time. Could you let me know of another time I can visit? As soon as I put work on track, I’ll be happy to visit you anytime apart from Easter and Christmas time. Don’t forget to prepare the camping gear; it would be amazing to go camping this time. I can’t wait to hear from you. Your friend, Anthony
Dear Mark,

Thank you
very
much for your invitation. It’s a
really
generous offer to put me up at your place in Canada for New Year’s Eve. I know how much that means to you and both of us were counting the days to have a reunion and spend
some
quality
time
together
but
unfortunately, I won’t be able to
make
it due to
some
problems that came up
suddenly
at work.

I’m
still
working on the opening of my new café,
but
the workers had
given
me
hard
time
. They
were supposed
to deliver their work a month ago,
but
the lack of workers and the shortage in material supply have caused the work to delay. We’re
currently
working around the clock to finish
before
Christmas time.

Could you
let
me know of another
time
I can visit? As
soon
as I put work on
track
, I’ll be happy to visit you anytime apart from Easter and Christmas
time
. Don’t forget to prepare the camping gear; it would be amazing to go camping this time.

I can’t wait to hear from you.

Your friend,

Anthony
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IELTS letter Essay topics: A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Thank him/her for the invitation. • Explain why you cannot come • Ask him/her about other times to visit. You need to

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
185 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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