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You are bothered by the amount of trash in your local park.Write a letter to the head of the city park department .In your letter: • Describe the problem with the trash • Explain why it is a problem • Say what you think the city should do.

You are bothered by the amount of trash in your local park. Write a letter to the head of the city park department. In your letter: • Describe the problem with the trash • Explain why it is a problem • Say what you think the city should do. Gjbj

Dear Sir, This is to call your attention to the amount of trash in the park. I have noticed this for a while now as I love to go to the park most evenings with my kids to enjoy it’s nature and beauty. It’s been drawing lots of attention to birds and cats which eventually spread it all over the environment thereby making it impossible to relax or take a walk in. There are residents around the park with little children as well and the pollution caused by the pungent smell evolving from the trash is not hygienic which could in a way cause food poisoning. There used to be a time when the waste management company visits the park thrice every week, which has significantly reduced, I implore you to look into this and have them remove the waste every other day, this I’m sure would make the park a beautiful place to be once again. Hope to see positive changes soon. Your Faithfully Ayodeji.

Dear Sir,

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park
. I have noticed this for a while This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 as I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to go to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 most evenings with my kids Did you mean "to enjoy its nature"?to enjoy its nature
to enjoy it’s nature
 and beauty. It’s been drawing lots of attention to birds and cats which eventually
 spread it all over the environment thereby making it impossible to relax or take a walk in.

There are residents around the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 children as well
 and the pollution caused by the pungent smell evolving from the trash is not hygienic which could in a way cause food poisoning.

There This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be a time when the waste management This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 visits the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 thrice every week, which has significantly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
, I implore you to look into this and have them remove the waste every other day, this I’m sure would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 place to be once again.

Hope to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Your Faithfully


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