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you live in a college room which you share with another student. there are problems with the current arrangement and find it really difficult to work

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that I am having issues with the current arrangement. While the accommodation is fine, I find it really hard to concentrate on my studies because of my current roommate. I hope you will help me with this situation. Let me explain my situation. It all started 4 months ago when my roommate came. Before that, things were better as my last roommate was considerate. However, currently, I am facing a lot of issues because my roommate stays up all late at night and plays loud music. As such, I am not able to concentrate on my studies. Would you kindly transfer me or my roommate to another room? I would much prefer to stay with someone quiet and considerate about the surroundings. It would help me to focus on my studies. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Prayas
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to
let
you know that I am having issues with the
current
arrangement. While the accommodation is fine, I find it
really
hard
to concentrate on my studies
because
of my
current
roommate
. I hope you will
help
me with this situation.

Let
me
explain
my situation. It all
started
4 months ago when my
roommate
came.
Before
that, things were better as my last
roommate
was considerate.
However
,
currently
, I am facing
a lot of
issues
because
my
roommate
stays up all late at night and plays loud music. As such, I am not able to concentrate on my studies.

Would you kindly transfer me or my
roommate
to another room? I would much prefer to stay with someone quiet and considerate about the surroundings. It would
help
me to focus on my studies.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Prayas
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IELTS letter you live in a college room which you share with another student. there are problems with the current arrangement and find it really difficult to work

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  American English
7 paragraphs
149 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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