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You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter. Describe the problem with the equipment Explain how this problem is affecting your work Say what you want the shop or company to do

Dear Sir, Greetings of the day. I am writing this letter to outline some of the issues which I am facing with the logitech keyboard that I recently bought from your company. I am serving as a I. T Professional in a Teleconferencing Company and these days I am working from home. As obvious to the nature of job, I constantly have to sit and work in front of my laptop so I decided to order wireless keyboard for enhanced flexibility in longer periods, but there are some problems with the device as some of its keys are not working properly, and even the light signal for ON-OFF button doesn't seem to work in a proper way, consequently I have to press a key everytime and check if the keyboard has switched ON which is causing a serious lag in my working patterns. As this device comes with a warranty for a year, I would like to request you for replacing this device with a fully functional one. Hoping for a positive outcome. Sincerely, Aden
Dear Sir,

Greetings of the day. I am writing this letter to outline
some
of the issues which I am facing with the
logitech
keyboard that I recently
bought
from your
company
.

I am serving as
a I
. T Professional in a Teleconferencing
Company
and these days I am working from home. As obvious to the nature of job, I
constantly
have to
sit and work in front of my laptop
so
I decided to order wireless keyboard for enhanced flexibility in longer periods,
but
there are
some
problems with the device as
some
of its keys are not working
properly
, and even the light signal for ON-OFF button doesn't seem to work
in a proper way
,
consequently
I
have to
press a key
everytime
and
check
if the keyboard has switched ON which is causing a serious lag in my working patterns.

As this device
comes
with a warranty for a year, I would like to request you for replacing this device with a
fully
functional one. Hoping for a
positive
outcome.

Sincerely
,

Aden
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IELTS letter You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter. Describe the problem with the equipment Explain how this problem is affecting your work Say what you want the shop or company to do

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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