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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter: introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

Dear Ms. Briganza, Hi, Hope you are doing well and in good health. I am writing this letter in regards to inform you about my upcoming house warming ceremony on 25th January. First of all, I like to familiarize myself; I am Tara your new neighbor. I along with the family will go to shift to the new house which is adjacent to you. Moreover, I am a working professional and works in one of the leading MNC of our country rest my parent’s stay at home as they are retired from their job. However, I am planning to have a get-together in evening as entire day equipped with initial rituals. Additionally we are arranging a music theme based party where anyone allowed singing once the professional cluster sum up their performance and it is followed by exotic cuisine in dinner. I hope you won’t mind a bit of loud music for that day. The first invitation is to you along with your entire family as it helps us to reunite so that we can dwell up with each other easily. Any kind of convenience is deeply regretted in advance and we follow rules to maintain the decorum at our level best. I hope you accept my invitation and join us for the party. With regards, Tara

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Briganza
,

Hi, Hope you are doing well and in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 health. I am writing this letter Use “in regard to”, “with regard to”, or more simply “regarding”.in regard towith regard toregarding
in regards to
 inform you about my upcoming This expression is normally spelled as one or with a hyphen.house-warminghousewarming
house warming
 ceremony on 25th January.

Often, this adverbial phrase is redundant. Consider using “first”.First
First of all
, I like to familiarize myself; I am Tara your new neighbor. I along with the family will go to shift to the new This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 which is adjacent to you. Moreover
, I am a working professional and works in one of the leading MNC of our country rest my parent’s stay at home as they are retired
 from their job.

However
, I am planning to have a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
-together in evening as entire day equipped with initial rituals. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Additionally,
Additionally
 we are arranging a music theme based party where anyone This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 singing once the professional cluster sum up their Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).performance, and
performance and
 it is followed
 by exotic cuisine in dinner. I hope you won’t mind a bit of loud music for that day.

The first
 invitation is to you along with your entire family as it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 us to reunite This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that we can dwell up with each other easily
. Any kind of convenience is deeply
 regretted in Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).advance, and
advance and
 we follow This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :requirements
rules
 to maintain the decorum at our level best.

I hope you accept my invitation and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 us for the party.

With regards,

Tara