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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Elon, Hope you are doing good. I am Kiruthika, living in your apartment, along with my family. Recently, we had a sudden plan to shift to Canada and so, without any visit, I agreed to rent your place during this month. Im quite disappointed with the furniture you have provided as one of the chair is not in good condition, it might break anytime. Despite that, I can able to find the cracksaround the corners of the dining table, the window holder is missing. I dont have any clue whether you are aware of it. I would like to meet you in person and clarify these issues. Kindly, take some necessary actions by replacing those or reduce the pay amount. I had agreed to the payment of 450 dollars per month as you have promised me that you will provide the house with good conditioned furniture. I look forward for your reply and I have attached the photocopies of the furniture along with this letter. Yours Sincerely, Kiruthika
Dear Elon,

Hope you are doing
good
. I am
Kiruthika
, living in your apartment, along with my family. Recently, we had a sudden plan to shift to Canada and
so
, without any visit, I
agreed
to rent your place during this month.

Im
quite disappointed with the furniture you have provided as one of the chair is not in
good
condition, it might break anytime. Despite that, I
can able to
find the
cracksaround
the corners of the dining table, the window holder is missing. I
dont
have any clue whether you are aware of it.

I would like to
meet
you in person and clarify these issues. Kindly, take
some
necessary actions by replacing those or
reduce
the pay amount. I had
agreed
to the payment of 450 dollars per month as you have promised me that you will provide the
house
with
good
conditioned furniture. I look forward for your reply and I have attached the photocopies of the furniture along with this letter.

Yours
Sincerely
,

Kiruthika
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IELTS letter You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
168 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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