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You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.

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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to complain about the wireless adapter which was bought last week from your emporium. Yesterday, we had a power cut at our home and found the equipment got suddenly hampered working. Now, I am unable to proceed with my office chore. I would expect an immediate fix for this problem. The wireless adapter that I purchased from you was operational until the end of the last day but unfortunately, it hindered its mechanism at the movement. I have tried to diagnosis the problem without any luck. Currently, I am using my LAN to connect to a personal computer to continue with my proceedings. As I am currently working from home as a software engineer: dealing with onshore clients as well as satisfying the customer needs, It is mandatory to have an uninterrupted Internet connection. As you can see, I am completely inclined on this appliance. Nevertheless, This issue needs immediate resolution. I would be grateful if you could replace this device with a new one or a repair. We look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Kathyayini.
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to complain about the wireless adapter which was
bought
last week from your emporium. Yesterday, we had a power
cut
at our home and found the equipment
got
suddenly
hampered working.
Now
, I am unable to proceed with my office chore. I would
expect
an immediate
fix
for this problem.

The wireless adapter that I
purchased
from you was operational until the
end
of the last day
but
unfortunately, it hindered its mechanism at the movement. I have tried to diagnosis the problem without any luck.
Currently
, I am using my LAN to connect to a personal computer to continue with my proceedings.

As I am
currently
working from home as a software engineer: dealing with onshore clients
as well
as satisfying the customer needs, It is mandatory to have an uninterrupted Internet connection. As you can
see
, I am completely inclined on this appliance.
Nevertheless
, This issue needs immediate resolution.

I would be grateful if you could replace this device with a new one or a repair.

We look forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Kathyayini
.
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IELTS letter You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
186 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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