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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.

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Dear Ivy, Thank you that you agreed to look up my house and my loving pet dog while I'm in Singapore to attend 3 days important business conference and I'll take the opportunity to stay two more days holiday to relax and to visit some beautiful places. My flight will be on April 15, 2021 and I'll return on April 20, 2021. I'll let you know incase there is some changes in my schedule. Please feel free to contact incase there are important matters you need to inform me. Here are my details; email address- rose@gmail. com, WhatsApp number 356297765 and my phone number: 0523674502. However, If you can't contact me in my phone number kindly message me in my whatsapp or do an email. The reason is sometimes no signal on my phone. My pet dry food you can find in the covered beside the fridge, her milk is keep in the fridge and some of her wet food. Give her half cup of milk and half cup of dry food. After she eat take her for 10 minutes walk. In the evening put her diaper it is located beside my pet bed. I would like to ask you another favor if don't mind, please do watering my plants every morning and lock all doors and windows at night before you sleep. I gladly appreciate your kindness. See you soon. Thanks and Regards, Rose

Dear Ivy, Thank you that you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesced
agreed
 to look up my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 and my loving pet dog while I'm in Singapore to attend 3 days This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 business conference and I'll take the opportunity to stay two more days holiday to relax and to visit This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 places. My flight will be on April 15, Some style guides suggest that commas should set off the year in a month-day-year date: "2021,".2021,
2021
 and I'll return on April 20, 2021. I'll This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know Possible spelling mistake found.Incasencaseincisein case
incase
 there is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in my schedule.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 feel free to contact Possible spelling mistake found.Incasencaseincisein case
incase
 there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 matters you need to inform me. Here are my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
; email address- Possible spelling mistake found.
rose@gmail
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCom
com
, WhatsApp number 356297765 and my phone number: 0523674502. However
, If you can't contact me in my phone number kindly message me in my Possible spelling mistake found.WhatsAppwhats app
whatsapp
 or do an email. The reason is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 no signal on my phone.

My pet dry food you can find in the covered beside the fridge, her milk is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 in the fridge and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of her wet food. Give her half cup of milk and half cup of dry food. After she The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "eats", "ate".eatsate
eat
 take her for 10 minutes walk. In the evening put her diaper it is located
 beside my pet bed. I would like to ask you another favor if don't mind, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "go watering".go watering
do watering
 my plants every morning and lock all doors and windows at night This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 you sleep.

I gladly
 appreciate your kindness. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
See
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Thanks and Regards, Rose