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On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the lost item. Write a letter to the insurance manager. In your letter: 1) describe the item you lost 2) explain how you lost it 3) tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the lost item. Write a letter to the insurance manager. In your letter: 1) describe the item you lost 2) explain how you lost it 3) tell the insurance company what you would like them to do. BJgAm
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to claim the insurance coverage for my lost camera with the bag during a recent trip to Ireland since my purchased insurance policy covers the below-mentioned camera. The missing K&F camera backpack includes CANON 700 7D camera, 150mm – 300mm lens, lens cleaner, USB cable, and 3D tripod 2020 model. Altogether, they cost around 7, 500Euros when I bought them in July 2019. The incident occurred when I was holiday trip to Ireland from April 1, 2020, to April 7, 2020. I was on the train to Dublin city with my backpack along with my friends and I am sure I had it with me all the time on the train. Regrettably, I realized that I missed my camera bag after I got down at the city station. Immediately, I requested help from Irish Rail lost and found department to search my gone camera. Unfortunately, I could not find it and lodged a lost complaint in Gardai National police. As per my insurance agreement, I am eligible to recover 80% of the priced amount of the lost item. Hence, I would like to request you to process my claim form and refund the money. Please refer attached form and acknowledgement receipt from Irish Police. I await your prompt response. Yours Faithfully, Saranya Velusamy
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to claim the insurance coverage for my
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lost
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camera
with the bag during a recent trip to Ireland since my
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purchased
insurance policy covers the below-mentioned camera.

The missing
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K&F
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camera
backpack includes CANON 700 7D
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camera
,
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150mm
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–
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300mm
lens, lens cleaner, USB cable, and 3D tripod 2020 model. Altogether, they cost around 7, 500Euros when I
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bought
them in July 2019.

The incident occurred when I was holiday trip to Ireland from April 1, 2020, to April 7, 2020. I was on the train to Dublin city with my backpack along with my
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
friends and
I am sure I had it with me all the time on the train.
Regrettably
, I realized that I missed my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
camera
bag after I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
down at the city station. Immediately, I requested
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
from Irish Rail
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lost
and found department to search my gone
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camera
. Unfortunately, I could not find it and lodged a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lost
complaint in
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Gardai
National police.

As per my insurance agreement, I am eligible to recover 80% of the priced amount of the
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lost
item.
Hence
, I would like to request you to process my claim form and refund the money.
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Please
refer attached form and
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acknowledgement
receipt from Irish Police.

I await your prompt response.

Yours
Faithfully
,

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Saranya
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Velusamy
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IELTS letter On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the lost item. Write a letter to the insurance manager. In your letter: 1) describe the item you lost 2) explain how you lost it 3) tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.

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