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Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course

Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course g5bLl

Dear Mr. Stark, My name is Jane Smith and I am writing because the new computing course you are promoting about Advance Digital Design is of interest to me. It has come to my attention that only experimented individuals are eligible to enroll, and that is a relevant aspect I wanted to discuss. I have never had formal education because I was Homeschooled, nonetheless, I have acquired a lot of practice in the software area autonomously in the last 8 years, especially with Photoshop which is my favorite development tool for editing. If you were so kind to consider me as a participant, I am willing to go through the testing of my skills. I am sure I can exceed your expectations. My timetable is very flexible, therefore I could stop by your office at any time of your convenience. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Jane Smith (Mrs. )

Dear Mr. Stark,

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 the new computing course you are promoting about Advance Digital Design is of interest to me.

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 practice in the software area autonomously
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Yours faithfully
,

Jane Smith (Mrs.Don't put a space before the closing parenthesis)
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