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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You plan to do some traveling in a few months. You would like to visit an old friend who lives in another country. You haven’t spoken to this friend in a few years. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Provide a short update about your life since you saw him/her last - Explain why you will be traveling to his/her city - Say what you would like to do when you visit his/her city

You plan to do some traveling in a few months. You would like to visit an old friend who lives in another country. You haven’t spoken to this friend in a few years. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Provide a short update about your life since you saw him/her last - Explain why you will be traveling to his/her city - Say what you would like to do when you visit his/her city pR1mw
Dear Kathy, Hope your doing well during these difficult times. It's been quite a while since we have last met and I can't complain much, as we both have busy lives. It would be really great to hangout and talk about my new found interest in music. I am visiting Nashville for my book tour and would love to catch up and spend time with you and family. I will be in the city on the March 3rd weekend, and would be flying out early Monday. Just like old times, let's find a good fishing spot at the near by lake and sit down passing time. I would love to talk with John about the new boat over couple of beers. I am bringing some gifts and candies for the kids, can't wait to see how those little boys of yours have grown up. Let me know if the plan works, leave me a response when you get the time. Your Friend, Akhil
Dear Kathy,

Hope your doing well during these difficult
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
times
. It's been quite a while since we have last met and I can't complain much, as we both have busy
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lives
. It would be
really
great
The verb 'hang out' is spelled as two words. The noun 'hangout' is spelled as one.
to hangout
and talk about my
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
new found
interest in music.

I am visiting Nashville for my book tour and would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to catch up and spend
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
with you and family. I will be in the city on the March 3rd weekend, and would be flying out early Monday.
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Just
like
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old
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times
,
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let
's find a
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good
fishing spot at the
Did you mean "nearby"?
near by
lake and sit down passing
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time
. I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to talk with John about the new boat over couple of beers. I am bringing
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some
gifts and candies for the kids, can't wait to
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see
how those
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little
boys of yours have grown up.

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Let
me know if the plan works,
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leave
me a response when you
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get
the time.

Your Friend,

Akhil

IELTS letter You plan to do some traveling in a few months. You would like to visit an old friend who lives in another country. You haven’t spoken to this friend in a few years. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - Provide a short update about your life since you saw him/her last - Explain why you will be traveling to his/her city - Say what you would like to do when you visit his/her city

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  American English
6 paragraphs
162 words
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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