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A reporter complained about a new tv program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. Describe your point of view. Say what you like about the show and why. Ask the newspaper to take some action.

A reporter complained about a new tv program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. Describe your point of view. Say what you like about the show and why. Ask the newspaper to take some action. 7aLj5
Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to you regarding a complain article on a television show, published last Monday in your newspaper. The article was about a recently launched show named as ‘Selfless human’ on Zee Punjabi channel. In my opinion, it is an excellent documentary show to encourage people for participating in selfless humanity programmes. Unfortunately, the reporter has been complaining in the article, which is not truth about it. Let me explain for what and why I am really into this show. The main reason is its uniqueness. Its main theme is to encourage people for preserve humanity, which I had never seen in any other telecast. Another reason, it is documented on a real story of a worldwide famous non-profit organisation. I would like to request you please warn the reporter and fine him for this mistake so that, he would not commit such misinterpretation again. I would also request you please do not publish any article without censoring in future. I am thanking you in advance. Yours faithfully, Samson
Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing to you regarding a
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complain
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article
on a television
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show
, published last Monday in your newspaper.

The
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article
was about a recently launched
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show
named as ‘Selfless human’ on
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Zee
Punjabi channel. In my opinion, it is an excellent documentary
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show
to encourage
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people
for participating in selfless humanity
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programmes
. Unfortunately, the reporter has been complaining in the
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article
, which is not truth about it.

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Let
me
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explain
for what and why I am
really
into this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
show
. The main reason is its uniqueness. Its main theme is to encourage
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
for preserve humanity, which I had never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
in any other telecast. Another reason, it
is documented
on a real story of a worldwide
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famous
non-profit
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organisation
.

I would like to request you
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please
warn the reporter and fine him for this mistake
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so
that, he would not commit such misinterpretation again. I would
also
request you
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please
do not publish any
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
article
without censoring
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in future
.

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I
am thanking you in advance.

Yours
faithfully
,

Samson
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IELTS letter A reporter complained about a new tv program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. Describe your point of view. Say what you like about the show and why. Ask the newspaper to take some action.

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