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You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter-describe the problem with the equipment-explain how this problem is affecting your work-say what you want the shop or company to do.

Hello Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the product purchased from you store. While the mouse purchased from your store is working fine, the VGA to Hdmi converter has stopped working which was bought on 22nd January 2020 from your store on MG road resulting with creating problems for me while working from home. I hope you will consider my situation favorably. Let me explain my situation. Firstly when I bought the mouse and converter both were working fine for a month. Later after the month the VGA to Hdmi device has stopped connecting and now showing the error message on external monitor as power saving mode. As a result of this issue I am unable to connect the external screen to my laptop and facing whole lot of complications while working from remote location. Would you kindly send your technician and check the device for me as I am positive that the device is under replaceable warranty. I would be more than happy if you replace the device. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Vick
Hello Sir or Madam,

I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the product
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purchased
from you store. While the mouse
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purchased
from your store is
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working
fine, the VGA to
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Hdmi
converter has
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stopped
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working
which was
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bought
on 22nd January 2020 from your store on MG road resulting with creating problems for me while
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working
from home. I hope you will consider my situation
favorably
.

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Let
me
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explain
my situation.
Firstly
when I
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bought
the mouse and converter both were
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working
fine for a month. Later after the month the VGA to
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Hdmi
device has
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stopped
connecting and
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now
showing the error message on external monitor as power saving mode.
As a result
of this issue I am unable to connect the external screen to my laptop and facing
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whole lot
of complications while
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working
from remote location.

Would you kindly
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send
your technician and
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check
the device for me as I am
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positive
that the device is under replaceable warranty. I would be more than happy if you replace the device.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,
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Vick
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IELTS letter You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter-describe the problem with the equipment-explain how this problem is affecting your work-say what you want the shop or company to do.

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6.0
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