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You have seen an advertisement for weekend work in a hotel in the town where you are staying. You have worked in a hotel before and think that the job would be suitable for you. You must apply in writing. Write a letter to the hotel manager expressing you interest. In your letter Introduce yourself Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job Ask what work you would be expected to do Write at least 150 words.

Task 1: Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to apply for a weekend work in your hotel that you advertised last Monday at Inquirer newspaper. I have similar experienced working in a hotel and I am hoping that you would look my resume that I attached with this letter. My name is Mikee Ortega, 26 years old. Graduated with the degree of Bachelor of Science in Hotel and Restaurant Management. I can speak Filipino and English. This job looks very interesting and it is something similar to my work experience. Last March 2015 up to October 2020, I worked as a frontdesk/ receptionist at the Manila Hotel. I am responsible for the people who checked in and out of the hotel and also updating the guest book. I have experienced working as a housekeeper, cleaning and bringing food to the guests are my tasks. I believed tht my past experienced can help me to apply at your hotel. In the newspaper the job description does not give details of the responsibilities. Would you tell me what work and duties I will be handling? I can start immediately and work 8 hours every weekends. Looking forward to meeting you to discuss further. Yours Faithfully, Mikee Ortega
Task 1:

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to apply for a weekend
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work
in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
that you advertised last Monday at Inquirer newspaper. I have similar experienced working in a
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
hotel and
I am hoping that you would look my resume that I attached with this letter.

My name is
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Mikee
Ortega, 26 years
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. Graduated with the degree of Bachelor of Science in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Hotel
and Restaurant Management. I can speak Filipino and English. This job looks
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
interesting and it is something similar to my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
experience.

Last March 2015 up to October 2020, I worked as a
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frontdesk
/ receptionist at the Manila
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Hotel
. I am responsible for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
checked
in and out of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hotel
and
also
updating the guest book. I have experienced working as a housekeeper, cleaning and bringing food to the guests are my tasks.
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I
believed
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my
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past experienced
can
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help
me to apply at your hotel.

In the newspaper the job description does not give
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
details
of the responsibilities. Would you
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tell
me what
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
and duties I will be handling? I can
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start
immediately and
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work
8 hours every weekends.

Looking forward to meeting you to discuss
further
.

Yours
Faithfully
,

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Mikee
Ortega
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IELTS letter You have seen an advertisement for weekend work in a hotel in the town where you are staying. You have worked in a hotel before and think that the job would be suitable for you. You must apply in writing. Write a letter to the hotel manager expressing you interest. In your letter Introduce yourself Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job Ask what work you would be expected to do

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
205 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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