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You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

Dear Adolfo, How are you and your family doing? We haven’t been able to catch up with each other despite living an hour of drive away. Therefore, I’m reaching out to invite you all to the event which had taken place in Fremont last week. . The city council has planned two weekend music concerts for its people, and that is without any charge. The first one was last Sunday but the coming up one is on this Saturday where renowned music artists from across the country would be performing. Because you have been a music admirer since you were a child, you will definitely have fun at the event. Apart from this, it’s the best place for children as there are a multitude of things they can do, and will not get bored. Fremont City authorities have allowed us to bring a family with the residents, hence I would like to invite you for the event which you and your family would love, plus it will be the occasion for our reunion. I hope you like the idea and would appreciate it if you show up. Warm Regards, Jaimin
Dear Adolfo,

How are you and your family doing? We haven’t been able to catch up with each other despite living an hour of drive away.
Therefore
, I’m reaching out to invite you all to the
event
which had taken place in Fremont last week.
.


The city council has planned two weekend music concerts for its
people
, and
that is
without any charge. The
first
one was last Sunday
but
the coming up one is on this Saturday where renowned music artists from across the country would be performing.

Because
you have been a music admirer since you were a child, you will definitely have fun at the
event
. Apart from this, it’s the best place for children as there are a multitude of things they can do, and will not
get
bored.

Fremont City authorities have
allowed
us to bring a family with the residents,
hence
I would like to invite you for the
event
which you and your family would
love
, plus it will be the occasion for our reunion.

I hope you like the
idea
and would appreciate it if you
show
up.

Warm Regards,

Jaimin
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IELTS letter You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite them to come to the event with you

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
189 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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