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A sports club in your area is about to be closed and you oppose to that. Write a letter to the manager and make suggestions why it is important that the club stays open.

Dear Ram, I am Ravi, a resident of Bapatla, Guntur. I am writing this letter by knowing about the closure of sports club in this area and I am against it. Nowadays, everyone is used to sedentary lives and not able to get time to do exercises. It is excruciating for the people to take that, there would be no sports club in the near future. This is considered as a recreation centre not only for the Children but also for the older people. It is imperative to have a sports club as it is helping the people to get fit. More ever, children will live in a hushed environment, which they don’t like, if there is no sports club. As it is, there are many shopping malls in this area, there is no need now to abolish this sports club and develop that to a shopping complex. It is compassionate, if you reconsider the decision of closing the sports club and I am hoping a prompt action from you regarding this matter. Yours faithfully, Ravi
Dear Ram,

I am Ravi, a resident of
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Bapatla
, Guntur. I am writing this letter by knowing about the closure of
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sports
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club
in this
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area and
I am against it.

Nowadays, everyone is
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used
to sedentary
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lives
and not able to
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get
time to do exercises. It is excruciating for the
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people
to take that, there would be no
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sports
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club
in the near future. This
is considered
as a recreation
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centre
not
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only
for the Children
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but
also
for the older
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people
. It is imperative to have a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
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club
as it is helping the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
fit. More ever, children will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in a hushed environment, which they don’t like, if there is no
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club
. As it is, there are
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many
shopping malls in this area, there is no need
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
to abolish this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club
and develop that to a shopping complex.

It is compassionate, if you reconsider the decision of closing the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
club and
I am hoping a prompt action from you regarding this matter.

Yours
faithfully
,

Ravi
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IELTS letter A sports club in your area is about to be closed and you oppose to that. Write a letter to the manager and make suggestions why it is important that the club stays open.

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